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Click hereI broke from our kiss and started bucking against her wildly and almost uncontrollably.
Without hesitation she straightened up and began pumping into me like a piston.
It felt like she was shoving 2 feet worth of hard, thick steel so far into me I thought I was choking on her.
Sheer animalistic passion. She was definitely laying claim and ownership of my ass. And I was willingly giving everything I could to her.
I started to feel her cock throbbing... this time each pulse felt like she was swelling to twice her size... when I realized she was cumming it sent me over the edge.
I started to tense up and felt cum stirring in my balls when she bent down and took the head of my cock in her mouth. Stream after stream of cum emptied into her mouth as she buried deep into my guts. I could feel my ass filling up with her cum which began to leak with each push. With her mouth completely full of my cum she moved up and kissed me again.
Oh my god, the sensuality of sharing each other's cum while fucking was unbelievable. She was still cumming inside me while we were making out. Low moans, light whimpers, and the smell of wonton sex filled the air. She finally stopped cumming and collapsed on top of me while we continued to make out.
Our kisses slowly started to become more tender and gentle. She slid to my side and draped her leg over mine as her half flaccid but still large cock lay on my stomach.
Our kiss broke and we both ended up falling asleep.
- COMMENTS
StewUp4Funalmost 3 years agoExcellent read. Read enjoyed it. A good mixture of romance, sensuality and raw sex.
Anonymousalmost 3 years agoThat was an outstanding read and even more so for a first effort. The few things that I would have liked more would have been a bit of a backstory on his ex-wife but the big one for me is not a mistake but it is something I have read in many stories. The individual with the tucked away secret will approach the big reveal by offering bondage as something they would both enjoy. Now I have no idea the kind of fear the transgendered person must be feeling. I can imagine it is fear of rejection, fear of violence or just fear in general after having to deal with many of the worlds close minded individuals if not outright big mouthed assholes who were never taught that you have no need to fear or lash out at those who are different than themselves. What bothered me in particular about this scenario is that she says she wants to basically be with him forever and yet she obviously doesn’t even know him well enough to trust him but instead ties him to the bed for safety reasons which is proven when she releases him after she can see he is accepting of her by his looks and actions. I understand the fear but I don’t understand the lack of trust in this situation and that somewhat killed it for me at the end. You still wrote an excellent story and what you wrote is in no way fiction as I am sure it has happened just like that in many hotel rooms around the world. I am just saddened that people feel it needs to be that way. I still believe this is undoubtedly a five star piece of work.
J.D.
Rapierwit24601almost 3 years agoThe story? Wonderful! Very sexy. An outstanding first effort.
The narrative? Needs some work. Frankly, only James Joyce can get away with paragraphs that long (and if you don’t know who he is - stop reading now).
The human eye is overwhelmed by such dauntingly long paragraphs, and the mind fades away. Not to mention that standard English grammar structure demands that changing character dialogue requires a new paragraph. Are you really a good enough writer to eschew form for content?
An astute editor could clear up these naive narrative errors and let the storyteller in you shine.
