All Comments on 'A Marriage Tale'

The bi-cuckolding was a major turn-off for me, sorry to say. I couldn't relate to any of your characters...they were all pieces of shit

Loved it!!!

Yep pretty shit story

With the subject matter the compliments will be few and far between on Loving Wives, but well written.

This nasty garbage is in the wrong category.

How exciting they found a sociopath to help wreck their marriage and their lives.

Yuk!

That's the way to put a gay story in LW! And all eat it up! That's as low as LW can get!

The author just confirmed with words what most of us know already, that cuckolds are basically homosexuals that won’t admit it. That’s why they allow their wives to fuck “real” men and get off on watching them with “big” cocks. It’s because they’re vicariously living the experience through their wives wishing it was them being pounded.

Interesting story, but the guy did not seem reluctant at all. And to avoid comments like Youami, I would advise a gay/bi like heads up at the beginning!

What a Bad story, 4 pages of crap, you really Lost your Time and ours

Bicuck is beyond hot. Love that he was so ready to eat wifey’s cunt but instead she told him to eat her asshole..doesn’t get hotter than that..Totally loved the serial degradation of this pathetic receptive anal queen.. just wish it was me..Thanks for an amazing story..

JT

Wrong category, not that there is any category that deserves this crap.

This is some sick stuff. The Gaycuck doesn't seem to get a name, as usual in these stories. The only advice I could give Gaycuck is 1. Grow a pair, and 2. Remember that Erik and Yasmin have to sleep sometime. And that is when you make sure they are well wrapped up in the sheets when you douse them in body temperature water. Then out comes the Louisville Slugger and you swing for the fence!

While I love cuckold stories, I don't enjoy reading about homosexual sexual encounters. Some advanced notice at the beginning would have been appreciated, because when the bi started, I left.

So many words, so little said. This failed like an equatorial republic--everything crashed all at once. Even the beta boyz hate it, and that's an accomplishment.

It's Paris....offer a night in the red light district and make sure they never come back!

Why didn't you warn us there was gay sex in this. Would never have bothered.

Hi all - thank you for your time in reading thus far and sincere apologies for the lack of heads up on the bi part. I did put that in the tags and if I can figure out how I will gladly put in a disclaimer. This was my first published story and I was under the impression this was indeed the appropriate category. Thanks again for the feedback. Cheers!

Great story! I´d like to be in his place.

Just plain bad! Not LW, but not sure what category suits this drivel.

Reluctant? Hardly. Sucking the guys dick before the end of page 1.

A queer cuck story. Just what LW needs.

Great read, had me there right to the end, hope you continue to write more

good read..... thanks. Any plan to advance this story line?

its ok to be gay today, just go be gay.

Great Story. I hope there is much much more to come.

This definitely needs a follow up

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