All Comments on 'A Matter of Will Ch. 01-05'

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homerjayhomerjayover 1 year ago

Very nice premise. I got a little lost when Uncle Bill and Mom got together and no Mom and Son action. Maybe that's part 2.

Fugue123Fugue123over 1 year agoAuthor

Thanks! Spoiler ahead, but things do warm up between mom and son in upcoming chapters.

bluerowdybluerowdyover 1 year ago

Boring, at the start, you kept repeating the couch over and over,,,,.... first time for me to score anyone a 2.

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Stories are just too much fun to not write them. I scribble short stories and now novels. I doodle sexy images. And I do both to create visual novels and games. I'm currently working on a visual novel version of "A Matter of Will," available for free, with a new chapter every...

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