All Comments on 'A Meeting of Few Words'

Powerful and well written. Looking for more!

I'm a middle aged married mom who just recently had her first affair. I met him online ,we chatted ,about everything and soon got around to sex. We decided to meet in person and it was like your stroy it was very sensual, I must say your story made me very wet as my fingers played with my clit. JOAN @ The JERSY SHORE

I liked how you brought this story to life, what I couldn't agree with was that we never knew anything about this woman, Why was she in a hotel? Was she a hooker? What was she crying for? Was she widowed? Did she leave her husband to move in with him? Was she evicted from her house? Did she abandon her family for him? How did they meet? And what about him? Also the lovemaking, you described it as seeming to last all day. or more like a week. "A night that would be repeated again and again" So did they ever come out of that hotel room? "She was resting in his arms once again" Was this a reconcilliation? Did she ever get sore? To many questions left unanswered. Which raised even more questions. Anyway, like I said I liked your writing but next time I think it would serve you better if you gave a little bio. of your characters.

This cheap whore is cheating on someone.