All Comments on 'A Messy Break Up Ch. 01: Kate's Revenge'

A great story, can't wait for the revenge. I'd love to see her bound, raped, and impregnated.

Breaking any confidence or trust he had in her. And you think he'd do anything other than plot some revenge? She's incredibly stupid! What fool takes pictures of herself committing a crime? He's not in bondage by his own choice. Which means she and Alan are looking at jail time. And I guarantee you Alan testifies against her in lieu of a lighter sentence. Is anyone really that dumb? Implausible at best, just outright dumb at worst. Horrible story telling that was incredibly poorly thought out. No stars.

what a dumb bitch. SHould have had Alan fuck his ass as a warning of what oculd happen. In stead she's screwed. Fucking idiot deserves it now.

with an O Shit ending. TK U MLJ LV NV

Yowza!

Total crap. Not even worth explaining why.

Ah well, the best laid plans of mice and women....!

She certainly set herself up for disaster. Very educational read.