All Comments on 'A Messy Break Up Ch. 01: Kate's Revenge'

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Marklynda2Marklynda2over 1 year ago

Ah well, the best laid plans of mice and women....!

She certainly set herself up for disaster. Very educational read.

kinked_a_bitkinked_a_bitover 2 years ago

Total crap. Not even worth explaining why.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Ouch! That is hot.

Yowza!

tazz317tazz317almost 9 years ago
THIS IS AN UH-OH

with an O Shit ending. TK U MLJ LV NV

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago

what a dumb bitch. SHould have had Alan fuck his ass as a warning of what oculd happen. In stead she's screwed. Fucking idiot deserves it now.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
So she spy's on him?

Breaking any confidence or trust he had in her. And you think he'd do anything other than plot some revenge? She's incredibly stupid! What fool takes pictures of herself committing a crime? He's not in bondage by his own choice. Which means she and Alan are looking at jail time. And I guarantee you Alan testifies against her in lieu of a lighter sentence. Is anyone really that dumb? Implausible at best, just outright dumb at worst. Horrible story telling that was incredibly poorly thought out. No stars.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
5 Stars.

A great story, can't wait for the revenge. I'd love to see her bound, raped, and impregnated.

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