by pursuedsub
Why does the mother talk so much? The story is written like you’re just putting your fevered dreams into a narrative.
Half the story is just the same 5 or 6 phrases repeated over and over and over. Was this AI written?
WTF why was she Wasting all her time with this Nasty shoe play stuff? Why didn't she just getting herself some Pleasure riding his face, and when she got tied of that turn around and let him eat her ass for awhile? When is she going to get him to look, for a good paying job too??
Strange comments. Write the story how you want it, although most ppl will find licking unhygienic things gross/off-putting
Smelling a shoe does NOT remove any odor. The odor is being transmitted whether there's anyone to smell it or not.