All Comments on 'A Misunderstanding Ch. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 months ago

Why does the mother talk so much? The story is written like you’re just putting your fevered dreams into a narrative.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 months ago

Half the story is just the same 5 or 6 phrases repeated over and over and over. Was this AI written?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 months ago

WTF why was she Wasting all her time with this Nasty shoe play stuff? Why didn't she just getting herself some Pleasure riding his face, and when she got tied of that turn around and let him eat her ass for awhile? When is she going to get him to look, for a good paying job too??

Roman2239Roman2239about 2 months ago

Strange comments. Write the story how you want it, although most ppl will find licking unhygienic things gross/off-putting

AardieAardieabout 2 months ago

Smelling a shoe does NOT remove any odor. The odor is being transmitted whether there's anyone to smell it or not.

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Stay-at-home subby hubby who writes stories to honor all of the women in my life who've shaped me into the submissive sissy I am today (when I have time to write after catching up with all my chores, that is). Kept in chastity and unable to indulge in my own imagination, so I ...

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