All Comments on 'A Model Mother Pt. 01'

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AmbulAmbulabout 1 month ago

Terrific story. I love the slow buildup as this beautiful very sexy and busty “newsagent” hawked her men’s magazines by dressing in more and more revealing clothes, with her stiletto heels. Now she wants to be in the pictures in the magazines. Can’t wait for the next chapter.

andyshepandyshepabout 1 month ago

i hope part two comes really soon amazing story so far

HardBenHardBenabout 1 month ago

Great start to this story. Looking forward to see how Emily "develops"....ha ha

jennyphiljennyphilabout 1 month ago

When Jenny was published in magazines she used to go into bookshops and reveal herself!

elling50elling50about 1 month ago

Well written. Interesting storyline. 5*

bawdi1bawdi1about 1 month ago

Great story and nice build up, can’t wait for the customer to shoot his load on her tits!

TheJoker33TheJoker33about 1 month ago

Great beginning to what appears to be a great series. I can't wait to see what happens next.

Geezer83Geezer8322 days ago

1. Exceptionally well written

2. Great job letting her grow with time

3, To me, much more realistic than most stories on this site.

4. Keep writing

KnightlySeducerKnightlySeducer11 days ago

Stunning! This is GREAT writing. I love the slow revelation of Emily as she grows into a strong, confident woman. Thank you!!!

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You might have noticed I've been really active recently. I will continue to release chapters of 'A Model Mother' on a weekly basis. I've also finished a single short story, a bit of a departure from my previous efforts. All being well, this should mean weekly stories release...

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