All Comments on 'A Most Unusual Girl Pt. 04'

A few spelling errors and issues with wrong words used that sound like the right words, but nothing a decent proofread couldn’t correct. The story itself though, is beautiful, thank you.

I can't wait to see what happens with Jo and Luke. This is fast becoming my most favoritenstory on this site. Please keep up your excellent work. Thisnseries could easily reach 10-20 chapters if you want to write them. Please do!!

Another interesting chapter. I enjoy reading this story not only because of the characters, but because of the premise. You do a good job on building and teasing the readers. I only saw a few minor mistakes and they did not take away from the story. Thanks for your time and imagination.

There is no Pighly Wiggly in Michigan. People grocery shop at Kroger, Meijer, Walmart, and Traverse City area has a few local stores too. I would say I dont know of any Norse people in the lower peninsula, but there might be a few.

Loving the series.

So damn good.

I've enjoyed all 4 chapters/parts. I did notice in this part 4 that Karl became Kurt and then back to Karl. Each part seem to have a natural beginning and ending.

what a beautiful family christmas had a few with my kids while they grew five

Loved it... again... I read this about 1 year ago. Thanks again for sharing!