All Comments on 'A Most Unusual Girl Pt. 05'

I'm worn out with all the sex and I can't keep up. I think superman would have a hard time cumming as many times as they have. It seems like it's been one long build up with everything going so well and then I read the preview of the next chapter and it seems the other shoe is about to fall.

If you cut the redundant sex scenes by half this would have not only been better but also half as long. I know that it's difficult to come up with original sex scenes but that's why less is more. Also, some of the language is pretty crude which is amusing because you wrote a female character commenting on the protags crude sex scene descriptions it was still a nice romance all things aside

Loving the story. Ignore the “critics”. You keep writing, I’ll keep reading. 5 stars!

I enjoy all your stories and as far as too much sex or too little it’s your writing so do it the way you like

still likeing but damn these people are energizer bunnies lol five

THESE ARE OVERSEXED

Loved it... again... I read this about 1 year ago. Thanks again for sharing!

This is an outstanding story in every respect, but it needs to be read from the first chapter in order to be properly appreciated. There is a careful balance between plot and sex scenes in this story, and they are skillfully connected by the author for a truly enriched reading experience. Five stars.

Very good tale, told well