All Comments on 'A Mother Comforts her Son'

by TerenceJames

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Nutman99Nutman995 months ago

Definitely liked this story. Hope you have a chance to write some more.

AnonymousAnonymous5 months ago

I rather quickly, gave this one a rating of 3. With respect to this being a first submission, the intro is unrealistic (too unrealistic,) and it this event Nipple, is so juvenile, that it is not even plausible. Seriously!!!!, she gave her son (a nipple!!!), a nipple, to comfort him after the death of a friend in college.

WantingToWriteGoodWantingToWriteGood5 months ago

Changing from 3rd person to 1st person then back to 3rd was a bit confusing. Otherwise, a delightful tale.

AnonymousAnonymous5 months ago

Confusing.

AnonymousAnonymous5 months ago

Horribly written. After several re-reads, I THINK this is written from the father's POV, but it's so badly written that's at best a guess. Also, who the hell is Susan?

AnonymousAnonymous5 months ago

" Then Susan had a bright idea" - who is Susan??

AnonymousAnonymous5 months ago

Okay story. My relationship with my son began with me wanking him in the shower when he was home from university. We had flirted for years, and I decided I would be the aggressor. So, I stripped and joined him when he showered, and I went straight for his cock, making him cum in only minutes. After that, we began fucking whenever privacy allowed. My husband never knew, and it lasted six years until my boy married. Write more!

AnonymousAnonymous5 months ago

Just an average story no much on the sex needed more info just a 3

Tica21Tica215 months ago

Could have used some editing before release. But I enjoyed the theme of the story. Lots more Could be done with the characters.

AnonymousAnonymous5 months ago

Didn't like it no incest just hand jobs gave it a 2

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