by TerenceJames
I rather quickly, gave this one a rating of 3. With respect to this being a first submission, the intro is unrealistic (too unrealistic,) and it this event Nipple, is so juvenile, that it is not even plausible. Seriously!!!!, she gave her son (a nipple!!!), a nipple, to comfort him after the death of a friend in college.
Changing from 3rd person to 1st person then back to 3rd was a bit confusing. Otherwise, a delightful tale.
Horribly written. After several re-reads, I THINK this is written from the father's POV, but it's so badly written that's at best a guess. Also, who the hell is Susan?
Okay story. My relationship with my son began with me wanking him in the shower when he was home from university. We had flirted for years, and I decided I would be the aggressor. So, I stripped and joined him when he showered, and I went straight for his cock, making him cum in only minutes. After that, we began fucking whenever privacy allowed. My husband never knew, and it lasted six years until my boy married. Write more!
Could have used some editing before release. But I enjoyed the theme of the story. Lots more Could be done with the characters.