All Comments on 'A Mother's Needs Pt. 01'

For those of us with taboo inclinations daring is a must. Rob will do well in NYC

A nice set up for the trip and next chapter.

Great start. He forgot the panties when he got back to his room. I hope they were dirty and the smell and taste drove him crazy.

Good start! Looking forward to more!

Good but needs a second chapter in NYC.

surly this story needs a part 2 to it

Good first story. Looking forward to more.

TOOOOOO SHORT

Please continue.

Too short, yes I know its part 1... but would have preferred a little more story

Great set up for additional chapter. Character identified, destination sufficiently away, potential established.

Please, PLEASE, Proof Read.

Quiet looking forward to their trip.

Not much to it there was no sex but I hope you continue through the trip 3 stars

A good start and I'm looking forward to the sequel, however... after near 40 years being partnered with women, experience has shown me that a woman scorned and as mad as it appeared Robbie's mother was when she left the kitchen, sex of any kind is likely the farthest thing from her mind.

Good start and looking forward to the next part.

Good series opener. Rob needs to describe his mother's body. Great for your first story.

Hope she comes back with a womb full of his seed!

Awesome start. Bring on more chapters. Maybe make them longer with more descriptive details. He needs to become his mother's Bull. Take over, take charge & take total control over her. Replace his father & make Dad their atm cuck! 5☆

Not much too it 3 stars

hurry please

Very believable writing is fairly well done it seems natural

what there was of it was good but then the reader was dropped mid-plot like hot potato! There's enough of that in real life. I read stories for entertainment and distraction and do not like being dropped.