All Comments on 'A Mother's Needs Pt. 01'

what there was of it was good but then the reader was dropped mid-plot like hot potato! There's enough of that in real life. I read stories for entertainment and distraction and do not like being dropped.

Very believable writing is fairly well done it seems natural

hurry please

Not much too it 3 stars

Awesome start. Bring on more chapters. Maybe make them longer with more descriptive details. He needs to become his mother's Bull. Take over, take charge & take total control over her. Replace his father & make Dad their atm cuck! 5☆

Hope she comes back with a womb full of his seed!

Good series opener. Rob needs to describe his mother's body. Great for your first story.

Good start and looking forward to the next part.

A good start and I'm looking forward to the sequel, however... after near 40 years being partnered with women, experience has shown me that a woman scorned and as mad as it appeared Robbie's mother was when she left the kitchen, sex of any kind is likely the farthest thing from her mind.

Not much to it there was no sex but I hope you continue through the trip 3 stars

Great set up for additional chapter. Character identified, destination sufficiently away, potential established.

Please, PLEASE, Proof Read.

Quiet looking forward to their trip.

Too short, yes I know its part 1... but would have preferred a little more story

Please continue.

TOOOOOO SHORT

Good first story. Looking forward to more.

surly this story needs a part 2 to it

Good but needs a second chapter in NYC.

Good start! Looking forward to more!

Great start. He forgot the panties when he got back to his room. I hope they were dirty and the smell and taste drove him crazy.

A nice set up for the trip and next chapter.

For those of us with taboo inclinations daring is a must. Rob will do well in NYC