by darwinmulay
Your stories are getting better with every chapter. More character development and spending more time developing risky clothing scenarios are helping the plot development. In the next chapter, you can introduce some ENF flavors to your character; the bus breaks down, the girl's luggage is stolen, and she is left with minimal clothing, making her really embarrassed. Things only get worse from there, leading to even more embarrassment and more public ENF situations! I look forward to your future stories.
I am waiting eagerly for the next installment. Any hints about what is coming next and when @darwinmulay ?