All Comments on 'A New Adventure'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
The best may be yet to cum

Cums to the point--yet you remain subtle, bonny. I'm starting to feel like I know you a bit. I did prefer your other story of this same date. More women invyourvnext ine, you can't have us all to yourself--or maybe you can at this rate. How many of us have you gotten going at home?

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Kinda dull

It doesn't have the suspense and tension of "The Beginning...", but that came mostly from it being new and daring...an actual adventure with some risk for both of them.

In this story, so far, there is no tension at all. We already know what's going to happen. She's going to fuck a bunch of guys she fucked once before.

It's possible one will get pissed and throw one of the others out the window. That would re-establish some tension, particularly if it was the husband that went flying.

As it is, she's just a slut, hubby's just a cuckold (nothing wrong with either), and there isn't a reason to give a shit what they do from this point on.

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