All Comments on 'A New Dawn'

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leah_gurlleah_gurlover 1 year ago

A wonderful story. I do hope there is a continuation!

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

So hot. Would love a pill like that!

whiteasianlvrwhiteasianlvrover 1 year ago

I love the sense of recognition and fulfillment that Dawn gave Don as he accepted what Luke gave him. I wonder if Luke could love Don as a man, too?

SissySalinaSissySalinaover 1 year ago

Was wondering where the "Dan" came from?

There should have been more trouble with finding fitting clothes, especially shoes.

BrendaNWBrendaNWover 1 year ago

This was an absolutely stunningly lovely story. I fact, through Dawn you captured just how I feel as Tiffany. A woman in a guy's body .. thinking and feeling like a woman. X-change would be a miracle for women like me, but until then, GCS surgery will help a lot .. in 16 days I will wake in the body that I have waited for so long. Thank you, and it would be nice to read more about Dawn and Luke .. BTW .. I recently met a good looking young guy named Luke :)

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Honestly we stan a Luke. Just a "Oh, right. Seems fine round two?"

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Love reading your stories! patiently waiting for the next story from this amazing author.

Merrick_WildcloakMerrick_Wildcloakover 1 year ago

I'm loving these stories, have you ever considered writing a novel length x change story? The sex is hot but more filler inbetween would be nice as well.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

My other side Jennifer would like a pack of those pills please. Lol

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Incredibly well written! I enjoyed the build up, climax and ending. I can't wait for part II - The long weekend"

VetitumVetitumover 1 year ago

superbly written. Bravo!

Joann57Joann57over 1 year ago

Another great story I can't wait to read another

sissyboi69Aricsissyboi69Aricover 1 year ago

I loved your story. the pills sound fun. I would love them. Even though I already found the woman in me. Please continue

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Yes so good really felt Dawn's pleasure. I think most guys don't understand how bad the ache of emptiness is as an aroused woman and how amazing it is to have it filled. Thank you so much

FeasibleFormationFeasibleFormation9 months ago

Super hot and surprisingly sweet

AnonymousAnonymous2 months ago

Fantastic work!

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