All Comments on 'A New Life Ch. 06'

The story is becoming repetitive and loosing focus. The inclusion of the scene between the daughter and friend although interesting was only a distraction. The confusion and thought process of the wife has not evolved as the story unravels. You have many threads that are ripe for exploration, I eagerly await the next chapter.

This series keeps getting better. Jen's slow submission is progressing nicely. She now has a proper dress code when she is sitting. I hope she soon falls asleep in her new attire with a nice bright ass and is discovered. Keep up the great work. Thank you.

What has happened to this story??!! It started out so well and has been one of the series of stories here for ages. This Chapter 6 is just a mess and needs serious editing. The inclusion of the children (never mentioned before!) and Stan having a fling too is just unnecessary. We don't need any of that, and it doesn't make sense. I hope that the author takes this chapter offline, cuts those parts out and just sticks to Jen having a mental struggle with her emotions. It doesn't need to get all weird. Just keep it simple. The first five chapters have been excellent,. Sorry, but Chapter 6 is not very good...

Jen's orgasms are too abrupt. They're almost matter-of-fact.

It was clear Stan was fucking someone but this chapter was rough.

Sorry.. but I have to comment on this new chapter. Awful. This story is a brilliant insight into Jen and her mental anguish of being used and abused, hating it but not being able to stop it. There is a line in an earlier chapter "what the fuck is wrong with me?". That is genius. Loved it. Donald has a text friend and I was rather expecting the story to develop where Jen is abused by both of them. Keep it simple and this is a brilliant story. To drift off into a pointless contribution of her daughter and husband is just not needed. I think this story could be superb but this Chapter 6 needs a serious edit.

Looks like Jen is going to become everyone's little fuck toy, even hubby's girlfriend Cindy and one of her daughter's college girlfriends.

i am not in to anal, but this series is great.

Need to regain focus or bring Becky into Jen’s life soon. Stan’s relationship with Cindy doesn’t really move the story, and possibly is a justification for an eventual divorce, freeing both to lead their separate lives of depravity.