All Comments on 'A New Master'

Would love for you to keep going with this story. To help Todd heal and Samson gets out of jail and Mark beats the crap out of him while defending Todd.😁

I feel like this could be a really good series. I need to see how Todd and Mark's relationship develop.

I want more. This is good and I'm picky.

I walk in and sit down with a mighty thud. Thud. OK, I really like your story and your style. Next, you need a gentle editor to clean up your spelling and grammar, just to make it a tiny bit more smooth to read. We want to read more of this story so get your mind on what your boy, Todd, and his new Master, Mark, are going to get active about. We are waiting on another episode of this relationship story so please don't forget us.

whoa! I didn't think that this was going to get noticed, at all! And yes, I TOTALLY agree about needing an editor. I wrote this story when I couldn't get it out of my mind. But I really do need to be better at both grammar, and spelling.