by verbotenwriter
So Parvati knew Sarah and moved to her hometown and did not consider the same last name as a connection to her gf?
This series has, at least till now, everything I love in an erotic story: morbid relationships, romance, only one guy involved, buxom women... I'd love the story to last this way although I wouldn't be surprised if it didn't. There are so many stories being ruined (at least for me) in the end... Will this one be one of them? I'm looking forward it isn't.
As soon as there was mention of a sister I knew this trio would become a quartet. ;) Though Sarah was destined to be inducted, it was wryly refreshing to get an outsider's incredulous input on the latent insanity of this whole setup. I -didn't- expect a serious segue into her emotional struggle: for what's been an overwhelmingly comedic piece it's fitted in surprisingly smoothly, to the point I kind of wish we'd had a more in-depth debrief of the Wandering Years. There's a stealthy gravitas in the closing sequence that would be even stronger if the theme of their detachment had been threaded through earlier chapters.
This is the best chapter yet. As much as I loved Max and his mom fucking each other, Max and Sarah just took this to another level