by femmed
Great so far...I love how the chapters have been written...can't wait to see what happens next...
The strangest thing about most femdom stories that I read are how easily men are manipulated. Any type of sex gets boring after awhile, no matter how much you think you can change it up. I didn't get the feeling that the man was into it mentally, more that his arousal was a physiological reaction in most part. All of the women seemed to be more trashy than the women in his other story. Overall, a decent enough piece of erotica..
I enjoyed every chapter. Bondage and restraint for their own sake isn't something I've ever really enjoyed reading about, but this story was a fun ride. I fell in love with Jane before the first chapter was over LOL. Great job.
I was drawn in from the first paragraph. The thought of being overpowered by a woman excites me. I hope that there might be more in the future.
This is, by far, the best series in Literotica. Of course, this is just my humble opinion.
He doesn't really seem to be into it mentally, he would have to be into humiliation and femdom pretty hard to agree to be janes slave. I think it would be interesting to explore it a little down the road and see one the crush has worn off how he adapted to be at jane's beck and call 24/7. Also it would be fun to see then around Halloween i have a feeling the public would get a little taste of all their crossdressing games. Also id be willing to bet that he'd be in panties and pantyhose 24/7
Would be to take control of his life .
Give her some payback .
She would learn a lot .
Then move on - fast .
I loved this from beginning to end. BUT hope it's not the last entry. This is my favorite story so far.
I have done the four today and the writing is excellent, story marvelous and have enjoyed every inch of its being. Please please can we have a part 5 femmed? X
Well, I will try and be constructive. The writing is OK but there are lots of spelling mistakes and grammatical errors. The storyline was mildly interesting to begin with but became so repetitive towards the end.
She was a psychotic, sadistic, bitch and he was the biggest most pathetic wimp in the world for not walking out when he had the chance.