All Comments on 'A Night at the Club'

not a bad story at all 5

great very hot story! Good detail.

Good story but how will he feel when one, or more, big cocked studs start fucking his Sara... and she loves it? Suddenly the situation takes on new meaning. Cheers.

Creative story and well crafted. Good work, loved it

Hot.

Simply hot!

Plenty of space for a new series. Well written.

Short, sweet, but perhaps most importantly, hot!

I'd ask for a sequel/follow-up, but maybe some other time

Welcome back! it's been a long year, but I'm glad now you're here

I hope everything goes well for you,

and thank you for sharing your stories here.

I'll be looking forward for the next one.

I have to agree with another commenter. In this story besides her husband Sara only had sex with girls. How will her husband feel when he sees her getting impaled by a cock that is way larger then his?

Well written story. Don’t worry or care about the negative feedback. I hope you continue to write.

And 8 months later the divorce was final

Great story! Would love to read more.

Please write more.

Loved it!!! You left it so open to go any one of several directions. Sarah and her new found sexuality could lead to……Mom, daughter. Mom in law, son. Future club visits. Girl time. New friends. Club special events, (Halloween, NYE, Christmas). With mom being a partner in the club, they could work there. Definitely have to have a story of make up with the family. Involvement of mom’s friends The list goes on…….

Can’t wait for future adventures 💯😃💯💯💯

Definitely add more please

This was just fantastic! Great to have you back. Would love to read the next adventure for sara and chance ALSO, please return to Swim Team!!! Love those characters.

Just finished Night At The Cluband all I can say is Dammm you tell a hot. story and do it so well. In fact your writing has just disrupted my plans for a quick read and then off to bedbug it now appears I'll be up till I've read my way through your offerings or collapse a post orgasmic haze after rubbing my cock raw before I get through your work.

Thanks for making my night,

Bill

Looking every day for part 2. Please post next chapter soon.

Your bio said this was a short story, but it would be a great start of a series. Please continue it!

This is a start to what can be an amazingly erotic series. Of course Sara only had sex with women this time. Of course Chance will see his wife with other men. We all risk everything when we roll out of bed in the morning. So, if Chance is a man who has proven his true devotion to Sara in all aspects of their life and serves her in their bed but also revels in her receiving pleasure AND THEN speaks with her about it, I’m hoping they’ve got a partnership. Honestly this to be an enduring series of amazingly exciting erotic expression from various perspectives. Don’t be in such a hurry to come to the last ejaculation. 😉

I am touched that my characters resonate so powerfully with my readers. When I started this story, it was supposed to be a short story. The Swim Team and Teasing Raine take a lot of thought and planning and I wanted do do something quick and simple.

As I started writing this, my characters kept threatening to run away with it like my other stories. I stuck to my guns and made it a short story. However, with all of this feedback, I believe I can integrate Chance and Sara into the greater universe of my stories. Rest assured you will see them again.

Excellent story, and thank you for actually giving the characters emotional resonance and consistency. It's way hotter when they feel like real people. *****

Very well written and can’t wait for next chapter. Hurry please

Hot and wonderful story. Other comments hint on Chance's response in seeing Sara being fucked by other men - with larger plumbing. Personally, I would have loved it to happen, ut may well be reserved for Chapter 2 onwards.

Nice story with the right kind of kink for me. A touch predictable hence 4* not 5.