by RoyJoy
Two errors dealing with sound: much sound is loud, not load. Little sound is quiet, not quite.
Having got to know each other so well at work that they wanted to meet alone, all good. But then he seems amazed that she wanted to go past “first base” which was strange. Maybe not. He probably hesitated to plunge the dagger because of her home-life, a husband and 3 kids. If that situation at home destabilised he might attract pressure to be with her all the time. Her and her instability and her drink problem.