All Comments on 'A Night I Can't Escape From Ch. 02'

I read this shit, and regrette it!!

Even though your writing skills are good, your subject matter is nothing but pure CRAP!

Let's see how that works out. Girth is equivalent to circumference. C=pi x D.

Therefore if we divide 2'' by 3.14159 we get a cock with a diameter of 5/8". Thus we end up with an 11" cock a little over 1/2" thick, a true pencil dick. The rest of the story is no better than the authors ability to distinguish between diameter and circumference.

is this supposed to be erotic? i think this story should be in the BDSM category.

First of all, I can't believe you put me through this torture. This "story" as you call it, is not worth anyone's time.

Point 2: Taking video without consent for the purpose of blackmail? Fucking illegal.

Point 3: No woman is worth self humiliation, PERIOD.

Point 4: Love? Love would be the wife not treating her husband in 2nd place (or worse) and like shit. They are husband and wife. They are together equal, and everything else is a bonus.

Point 5: If the wifey wants the big cock only, let her go for it, and tell her "Don't let the door kick you in the ass on the way out".

Point 6: Wife treating her husband like shit? Any man would have gotten up (after being released), and left. File papers in the morning.

Point 7: Rreputation ruin threat. Go for it. No woman is worth that.

Point 8" As for the "bull", cutting his nuts off and shoving a baseball bat far into his ass would be good for starters.

NOTE TO AUTHOR: GET A NEW FUCKING BRAIN!!!!!!!!!!!!

Waste of time to read. There is no amount of payback that could make the husband anything but a cuckold. Wish I could rate this garbage less than zero.

There is no drug in the world that can cause a woman to desire sex. If there were, it would be bigger than Viagra. Further more, with the plethora of online porn available and the some of the hotties who are videoed, there would be no reason for rich men to spend lots of money to watch some guy watch his wife get fucked by someone else. As well, if the situation was such a turn off as hubby claimed, why would he have an erection...not too mention, if his wife loved him as she claimed, she would not verbally abuse him. Finally, an 11" cock would pound the fuck out of her cervix. My wife spent an evening in the hospital when a boyfriend broke through the cervical cap...and he was only about 10" (or so she claimed). In any case, this story was shit. The writing was shit and the characters were shit. If that is what you were aiming for, CONGRATULATIONS! You succeeded.

A story expresses what is in the writer's mind. From this story, it is obvious this writer needs years of therapy to regain his manhood. Get the help you so badly need, writer. Start today.

pretty much as I think. Let me see, didn't you say that the couple had two children...they have been married for eight years so that makes the children young. Nick the (master that's said with the flap of a hand and a lisppp) Weaponx you are not a weapon unless it's a spitball..a wet saliviaaa spitball at that...you cream puff..Ho Ho...here is WEAPONX..the great...oh give me a fucking break. Heres a little pipsqueek ( oh yes he squeeks like a mouse when he talks...(call me master hahahahahahaha) call him little dick the bug fucker...Your characters are nothing but you are the real prize...tell me do you stand in front of a mirror in your boxer shorts and a towel tied around your neck and beat yourself on your skinny bony cheast and make squeaky sounds like "man of steel...man of steel...hahahaha you're funny and your stories should really go in the funny category..oh sorry they don't have that yet...hahahahahahahahahahahaha

While this story is pretty bad in terms of plot and character, it is worth noting that the author's prior work follows similar themes and is similarly incredulous. The author and a few readers will enjoy the forced cuckhold approach and that's that. Just ignore hios work in future if this offends, but give him a break!

they make for one thing and that whoring.their men are all fags or bi.more whores for the brothers.just cause after reading this story.

some point to this story. Let me see if I understand -we have a "loving" couple who is ensared by this evil Nick with the huge cock in a small town area. Beth could not see her husband tied up. Beth was high on drugs. Beth degrades her husband of eight years before total strangers who she just met. Beth could not tell that Jake did not agree to her flirting and cheating and in fact she enabled this whole situation. So Jake has to wait a week (while taking care of the kids) for Beth's return. In real life, most men would take the kids and leave because obviously Beth is an unfit mother. Beth wanted to cheat openly before her husband (who in their right mind would go in a private room with total strangers in a strange place). Beth would find herself in divorce proceedings.>>>

You know if you had described Jake enjoying himself the reader could understand why he would let these things happen to the two of them but to let your wife be blackmailed into being a whore? What about the police? What about their family and friends?

"Loving wives" what a total misnomer. Never before in LV have I been so moved to say that the writing, the theme, the "plot," the action have been so thoroughly disgusting, reprehensible, worthless -- and, in a word, shit.

Jeez - everybody hates wimpie sicko's addicted to self disrespect eh writer.<P>

But I get it. You require doses of hate mail as it makes you feel inferior as you are to normal males -- or --- you really are a woman who was hurt once by a real man so this makes you feel better rather than rejoining the human race!<P>

Gotcha sweetie - and so sad - get some help little sick one - who knows perhaps you will regain a little of the self respect you once had.

no other word. What a way for the husband to gain the upper hand by licking the cum from his wife, or, to go home and patiently wait for for a week for her to return home, so that they can talk and see where they stand. How may more video will be available by then. Stupid. He should have kicked the "master" in his balls and left her there to enjoy him for the rest of her life. All the contempt she shouted at him cannot be due to alcolhol or a drug. So stupid again.

Sorry. G.Belgium

person who wrote this needs urgent psychiatric care.

I dont think anyone can dispute that

because there has been no point and no enjoyment in the crap you've given us so far

Completely unbelievable! If, upon release, Jake "had" to place this huge cock at his wife's pussy entrance (using one hand, I would assume) why wasn't he CRUSHING (even removing) the schmuck's balls with the other?

You belong in a phycho institution where you can be locked up for life. Please do us all a favour and leap off a very high cliff.

Take your meds!

when he first got loose at that point a man and most men would never do even close to what nick suggested ...ill say what id have done ...id have drove my fist through his fucking head ...and as far as barb would be involved if she complained id do her sorry ass also ...when beth screamed id take his fist and drive it into her face grab her hand and scratch his face and body with her finger nails ...then after id killed nick and barb ...it would be to tell the cops that i was schackled and they made a mistake and let me loose t ohumilitate me fut=rther ..at that point i savedmy wife from her rapist and in the insuing fight while under attack from him and his wife i protected myself and my wife and killed them both before i knew ...i d obelieve my wife would go along with that story especially after seeing me kill the patsys that raped her ...i think by this time she would know she had been raped and the beating she recieved by him and me would let her know that since he was dead she better go with what i said if she wanted to get out of this ....and yes it would be great later when she realized that now she owed me a good fuck with a cpl of other nice ladies...especially after what she alloowed her rapist nick to do to her ....and after the way she talked to me and about me she better never say no to anything id want to do to her even if i wanted to ass fuck her ...i do believ id pierce her cunt lips and see put a lock on her cunt so she couldnt fuck anything but me ...she would have to come to me just to take a piss ...id make her sorry that she ever said anything about a little piss ant like nick being anything except slime under my foot to grind into mush ...just like i did ....a man who has to drug a person and lock another up to get pussy ...hell thats not a man thats a cockroach ...now take this stroy and make it real ...show everybody what a man would do to trash like this piece of shit nick...either that or get used to zero's

either of the two owners would make it coming out of the club? And what would stop them from going to the police and report being drugged, abducted, raped, video taped, and generally made slaves? A good fantasy but that is all there is. Personally chained to a chair would not have kept me from using the chair on him in the act. The wife here has demonstrated some real repressed or hidden feelings. Seems she really has no respect or love for her husband. Both of them are very stupid, very stupid indeed.

This piece of trash gives trash a bad name.

What a man you are, writer. Go piss on yourself

The title says it all.

my god you have serious mental issues! for your own sake, get some professional help. I've read a lot of crap on this site... this pretty much has to be the worst peice of shit I've seen anyone post... why would you even waste your time creating it?

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The liberal use of alcohol and drugs makes this entire story based on real rape. I was looking forward to an ending or climax that would have either a more realistic feel from the characters than what you've written. Rape victims don't pine for their rapists for a reason, it is very real trauma. This would have been interesting if the married couple had actually been undercover to bust the club owner, or if the husband had any real emotional response (aka anger, irrational anger).

<p>Harry as usual doesn't understand the fascist dynamic, even though he apparently is one.</p>

<p>It was the Nazis who were a bunch of sexual perverts; who liked to humiliate and be humiliated; who dressed in heels and women's underwear.</p>

<p>Yes, this writer is obviously a Bush supporter.</p>

u motherfucker... go n fuck ur mother in her ass, insted trying to write a story.

I have not read your story as there is not one comment of anyone liking your story. I have never seen such a thing as four pages of comments and not one was encouraging. I will pass on reading this as it must be one of the worst fantasy stories put out!! Not one good comment out of four pages!! WOW!!!!!!!!

please don't drag the elections into this mud.

I was principally going over the comments to get entertained, but beyond the entertainment value there are some serious issues out there like life and death in Iraq. So let's leave it out and focus on the literary qualities of this story. Just my two cents. <P>

Speaking of which, I was glad I had my lunch more than two hours ago. Another snory on the ever popular theme (only in the LW section) of the humanoid type known as Homo - Humilianosis. If found free please refer to the nearest MH clinic.

Seriously - HELP! can't we have something else other than cum drinkers for a change?

You negative people ought to lighten up a bit. It is a fictional story you know. Reading some of the comments, it seems that the critics take stories like this as some sort of personal attack on their own fragile egos, that they have to defend. It is understandable that the odd person will not have enough maturity or self awareness to see this story as just a work of fiction on an internet site but what is quite sad is that there are so many in the same vein.

To all the deviants who think a guys like this dyke has written about-PENIS ENVY is the saddest form of flaterry

Do us a favor and forget about writing more of this crap

As usual, the negative comments flag a fucked up story with a sick author. Shame!

What a bunch of whining wimps. Excellent story keep up the good work.

Thank you for teaching me to read the comments before reading the story. If I had read the comments I would have moved on.

Two major problems: 1) The story sucks and is totally unsatisfying with no conclusion. 2) Your writing and attention to literary etiquette are totally missing. Try reading your stuff before you send it. You would find out how poorly you write if you did (but I guess that explains why you don't proof).

I can only conclude that you are very fortunate that you don't have to make a living by writing. Give it up.

I normally don't provide anonymous comments, but I don't want to hear anything more from you.

for sure

I think the story is great! Fon't ubderstand what kind of person can rate a story without even reading it! lol

Keep up the good work! Thanks for taking the time to submit your stories :)

Oh jay, the eunuch strikes again with another missive that have me rolling on the floor in laughter. Your attempts at writing always makes my day, after all they say that laughter is the best medicine. Let the humor flow

Oh no the spineless one is back again to sumbmit us to more crap. This should be made mandatory reading in dentist waiting rooms. After reading one page of this, then root canal will come as a welcome relief

There can only be three possibilities:

1 It is ex weapon itself trying desperately to get a score of 1.

2 It is an inmate of the state mental institution busy with occupational therapy writing.

3 Donkey from Shrek writing between filming scenes

I wish you people would stop picking on weaponex and rather direct your comments at the idiot who opened the airlock while he was inside. The doctors said that after being deprived of oxygen for so long his brain functions would never recover but just look at how he proved them all wrong.

You can't write and I can't give you more than a zero score. Ain't a man with balls either

Hurt by a real man so bad that he just can't get over him.<P>

You really are sad wepie - in an effort to regain some self respect get some help soon before the self cuck addiction drags you down further - soon it will be drowning puppies and kittens little sick one.

why is this crap even published here? A ten year old mental retard could do a better job or maybe it is?

My wife's too shy to try something like this, but it's certainly fun to think about! Please keep up the good work.

Wish I could rate it at a minus

Second the wife is now a whore. Why not blow the place up or simply go in and shot everyone inside. If you are insane be insane. Or you can be a real man, divorce the slut, and take the kids and leave. She is trash, if she wasnt before, and I question that, she is now. Dont forgive just forget and get on with it. You might want to have the kids tested just in case they arent yours, you could leave them for her to take care of if not.

I too wish I could grade it a minus. Nothing but animals and trash in this, nothing erotic in any way, unless some sick bastard is into torture and degradation...and there's nothing erotic about that, either.

My GOD weaponx, you are simply a CHILD. This is a fucking joke!

The story is great, sexy, dirty - everything you want from a porn story site. Keep em coming!! But once again we have the usual band of insecure guys who seek these cuckold stories out, and then slate them. All because they can't handle what REALLY TURNS THEM ON. Sad losers. Just jack off and enjoy!!

or mentally retarded or is he just gay?

i think jake needs a closet to come out of!

All Jake had to do was get the police and Nick and Barbara would soon be in prison grays for an extended stay.

Impossible. What the fuck went through your mind as you wrote this? How will you finish this?

Listen to what the readers that commented to this trash and quite writing.

PURE FETISH NC SF CRAP

the negative posters. They get off criticizing what they don't accept/understand. Classic bigots.

My study of the responding posts suggests that everybody loved it! Granted most curse with embarrassment while they get off!

Still you might consider a final chapter as the new slave wife adjusts to her new role as an auctioned sex slave? Will she end up sold to a brothel in Mexico or in the middle east or Africa or southeast Asia? I doubt her husband ever sees her again...

Closet homosexuals getting off eating other men's cum.....how revolting...

Only perverts back up this story

This is that twat Beth's fault! Nutless hubby should just leave the slut with Nick,file for divorce,and take the kids and move far away. (OR, pick up an automatic weapon and return to the club and blow Nick,Beth,Barbara,and anyone else around into the Happy Hunting Grounds!)

One of the saddest here...1*

I would bust a cap in that piece of shit !

No real man writes this shit, God can only hope karma kicks this piece of shit in the head soon...

Please, please, please never write anything again. Not even a birthday card. This is a terrible story. Well it is not even a story, just a collection of words thrown together in a bad way.

What a ridiculous, contrived piece of crap story! Every possible wrong choice is made - that alone is simply impossible! How dare you insult your readers by thinking they are so gullible as to give this crap a read? I got two paragraphs in and just about puked from disgust! Is this all you can come up with while you finish your time in prison for stupidity??!!

pure shit ..........................................................................................................................

Just totally lacks any credibility even as fiction.

Any man in his position fights. Threaten Nick and Barbara. Take the tape to the police. This was just stupid.

grow some balls go back and burn the place to the ground

Weak guy no real love for himself or his wife. Must be a cuck because he let it happen.

The poor little cuck watches.

Damn glad I always check the comments!

Quite the brainless, plotless, characterless waste of time and bandwidth. Wish I could give negative stars.

You're sick, man. Either you're humiliated like this wimp or wanna be. You go, get yourself a counsellor.

This plot isn’t believable. It’s got holes and inconsistencies everywhere. Disappointed.

Too many times he didn’t stop it. So what if he just raped her? He did anyway what with the drugs he gave her. He should have asked her at first if she knew how to spell divorce. Too many chances for an out and he didn’t take them.

If this doesn’t end with a divorce it gets a - 10.

It’s really not logical at all. Pure fantasy with no respect to reality.

Bill S.

This was ridiculous. Like really? His plan was to wait it out until the moment he got the upper hand? Then everything opportunity turned into a thought of whether this was his fault or not. Then you have Nick who thinks he's an alpha but will let another dude touch his cock. Barbara can't think for herself. At least Beth is drugged at this point. Everyone else is just a daft moron. Then Nick admits to filming them and will sell their videos without their consent. Still, no ideas spring to life? This shit belongs in the non consensual reluctance stories.