All Comments on 'A Night in the City Ch. 02'

One of the best I have read in a while,truly erotic and fun.Going to be fun to see where this goes....

A loving wife is not a slave. This is BDSM all the way. A LW is independent, strong, and in complete control of HER needs and desires. She has that power over her husband, and he serves HER wants for extra thrills, not the other way around.

... was someone to proof read it and take out the multiple errors!

It got very distracting having to try to work out what it was that you thought you were saying as opposed to what you actually wrote!!

Sorry, maximum of 2*!

Loving wives and couples play at things like this all the time,and your image of slavery is also a bit off.First of all,this isnt lifestyle slavery,it is playing,and even if it were lifestyle there are people who are married and live that way and it is for both of tjem,no matter who is the dominant.There is nothing degrading about this story,and it seems loving....

Also poorly written.

1. This is BDSM and Group Sex.

2. This is not Loving Wives.

Raises the issue of LW being read so much more than any other category, writers mis-classify their stories to get to the most readers. Not a criticism, just a thought.

I have to disagree with those that say this story is misplaced in Loving Wives. According to the menu of categories, Loving Wives = "Married extra-marital fun: swinging, sharing & more"

There is hardly any bondage or discipline. Certainly no S or M. Just a married couple having fun. The slave game is just a that, a game. Not at all like the slavery you will find over at the BDSM category. I hate to think what kind of BDSM those readers would put me through if I put it there. Yes, there is some group sex, but swinging is included in the Loving Wives category.

Unfortunately, some stories just don't stay between the lines.

As far as the errors, sorry about that. I must have read it hundred times.

Thanks for reading.

Get out of your moms basement, get some fresh air and sunshine, quit playing with yourself all day, get a job.

Lived it. Please add more, I love your style of writing.

Stories about slaves and submissive are trash on the same level as cuckolds.