All Comments on 'A Night in the Theatre'

Wow. Where can I see this play?

Absolutely must be staged! It will take a daring theatre and director.

Fascinating i will read again. Very very good and something as a man to identify with. WOW

That would be a dream, if someone staged it. Of course, I have visualized it through, so can see it done.

Why are all the female protags in ENF/exhibitionism stories slender with C-cup or smaller breasts on this site? It's just strange to me that three breast sizes and one figure are so ubiquitous to one genre, especially when so many scenarios or situations can be made from curves or large breasts with sneaking around nude or losing clothes. The anthropologist in me is fascinated about what this narrow selection of character bodies in this specific genre might mean about the demographics who use this site!

Cyberweasel89 - you are right in many ways. Professional actors are a non-representative cross-section of society, however, and I had a particular friend of mine in mind here.

@Vitavie! Ah, I see! I have to question wanting to enforfce non-representative figures based on careers, though. But I understand having a friend in mind while you write.

Fascinating story. Dominance and submission is not my thing, but the dynamic and its sudden shift were really intriguing. Even more so the dynamic in the prose itself, the shifting in and out of formality, treating the fourth wall like a window that makes the audience a part of the scene itself.

It seems like English is not your first language, and I can't decide whether certain misses were intentional, but here, they weren't mistakes, even if accidental. They reiforced that feeling of being off balance, and along with breaking that fourth wall, put the author's own uncertainties into the scene (breaking a fifth wall?). Normally, a gross violation of literary etiquette, but here it seemed to add to the aura of the whole thing.