I have the feeling that you have been there. I like your little story and you should tell us who you are and where you are from. I for one would like to see more of your work.
I started to write some stories for my partner and they were well received, so we thought we'd publish one or two and see what Lit readers thought. I have used language that my partner prefers. They're loosely based on real experiences.Comments and feedback are welcome.