All Comments on 'A Night Out'

I do not know how you manage to write these fine one off stories while keeping your main story moving on. Glad for the ending of this one. added to my enjoyment of the story. One I would like to read more off is your blind date story, hopefully you have more planned. Cheers. -- UK CYNIC.

the story did make me cringe once or twice .

and the ending really surprised me , i love

it.

The harshness of it in itself was fantastic, and the way that she was reluctant of the fact that she was liking it was so hot! And I love the twist at the end ;D very unique and sexy

Man I was afraid the gear shift was going to puncture something and make her bleed. A vagina and cunt isn't as deep as a gear shift is long. To me that seems a little danagerous.

Lovely story! Really hot but I would edit it so that every single line coming from the master isn't ended by "bitch". It seems like the legally safe knock off of Freddy Kruger in rick and morty to be honest. Other than that, great story!