All Comments on 'A Parting Glance'

Oh my word! You manage to convey so much in such a short piece. It's utterly fantastic! Less, in this case, is most certainly more! I can now use my imagination to conjure up how these two women met originally, and what they are going to get up to next Tuesday. Unless you write the sequel and tell us, of course! This vignette must have 5 stars.

Very nice; so much left unsaid which heightens the pleasure of reading this short piece.

Ah, what a beautiful slice of life, Mama xxxxxx

In 750 words, the entire plot of many a novel about infidelity. Very well done, in fact five-star done.

I loved how the husbands were discussing future business plans while the wives were discussing future pleasure plans. Each set had their priorities. I’m definitely more interested in how the wive’s pleasure plans develop. - Maybe another little vignette to satisfy the reader’s curiosity would be in order. 🍿🍿🍿🍿🍿

I second (or third or fourth) the request for another chapter. However, the glass is already empty when Serrada kisses it.

Perhaps the song can give clue whether story continues?

A nice opening, I am proud to be your friend and lover, but your beloved friends deserve to learn more about us.

Thank you all for your lovely comments. I appreciate each one of you for your support. Perhaps sequel is in order.

Apart from loving the story, all I can say is: lucky Helen!

Your comments on other stories are as shitty as your writing.