All Comments on 'A Perfect Elven Princess Pt. 02'

What makes you think that this drivel is in any way erotic ??????

Ouch!

Very interesting. The pair no longer even cares they're abandoning their history and heritage.

Menotes, all I can say is to ignore the insults in the comments.

The other two anonymous idiots who have commented are lacking in taste.

Please continue this one, I am really looking forward to chapter three.

Highly erotic and very visual. Love your writing style and foreshadowing… Looking forward to seeing if there’s a hidden twist. Not sure you can wrap this up in only once more chapter but I’m intrigued and fully vested in the story line.