All Comments on 'A Perfect Meeting'

by SexyRider51

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BroadusBroadusalmost 2 years ago

Sensual, erotic, passion.building and then carrying the lovers away. My favorite kind of story and very well written.

muskyboymuskyboyalmost 2 years ago

Needed, badly needed, some dialogue.

chytownchytownalmost 2 years ago

*****Fine piece of complete short storytelling. Thanks for sharing this very entertaining read.

AnonymousAnonymous9 months ago

A Perfect Meeting is a wonderful, very romantic story, but it could have been even better with a solid introduction to the characters and some background concerning their relationship. The love scene is well-written, and very sweet, but disappointingly short. The third last paragraph of the story is far too brief, and should be greatly enhanced.

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