All Comments on 'A Pleasant Surprise Pt. 05'

Life is good now...so what can possibly go wrong from here? XD

Dialogue and character is on point as always. Idrk what else to say, it’s just..really good, as always.

This has been one consistently excellent story. Everything about it comes across as real and the emotion comes through clearly. I am looking forward to the meeting of her father considering the guy is never around for days at a time. That isn’t incredibly unusual but I always found it interesting when a new guy meets the father. Thanks for the story and the continued skill you use to create it.

J.D.

Great story!

Your story/writing is awesome! I'm a romantic and get into love stories! Don't stop!