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Anonymousabout 18 years agoHope this is helpful
You really need to decide if you are writing in English or not. It is a turn-off having a string of unrecognisable words followed by a translation - breaks the flow of your story.
Anonymousover 16 years agowhere is the rest of the story
hi...great story..where is the rest of it...
Anonymousabout 14 years agogreat story
one of the greatest story ive ever heard. when u r gonna deflower her kori.
naughty Papaalmost 10 years agoInteresting
I liked the story line but feel you can make it hotter as it is Amitas first time
Anonymousover 6 years agoWhere is Ch.02
Very well written erotica, but the chapter. 02 is long awaited
ThomasHardy157about 2 years agoI loved the story. The build up is great. Leads to a lot of expectations. Also allows you to write several more follow on stories. Later you can get her sister into it. Keep going
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