by sahebji
I loved the story. The build up is great. Leads to a lot of expectations. Also allows you to write several more follow on stories. Later you can get her sister into it. Keep going
Very well written erotica, but the chapter. 02 is long awaited
I liked the story line but feel you can make it hotter as it is Amitas first time
one of the greatest story ive ever heard. when u r gonna deflower her kori.
hi...great story..where is the rest of it...
You really need to decide if you are writing in English or not. It is a turn-off having a string of unrecognisable words followed by a translation - breaks the flow of your story.