All Comments on 'A Project for Bethany Ch. 03'

by royalrogue

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AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Grooming matty

Love the story about grooming Matty. Love the way you weave the continued sexual tension between Bethany and matty. She continues to make demands on him and he continues to submit. What role will his sister play in his grooming? Will she take an active role? Will he be trained to submit to other dominant women? Will he be required to endure more extreme duress before being allowed to orgasm as part of his training? Keep writing we can't wait to find out.

kevinlarochekevinlarocheover 3 years ago
Please update soon!

Thank you!

GrrrreatImaginationGrrrreatImaginationalmost 3 years ago

Ohh. This was verrrry well done.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Still a good premise.

Still lacks needed details.

Four stars.

maddictmaddictover 1 year ago

I'm warming up to Bethany.

I've got the pussy,

I've got the power. (!)

cmj711cmj711about 1 year ago

Happy she had him do an enema!

Hotstuff1PHotstuff1P11 months ago

Deep into Betany's spell now. Poor Matty life will never be the same.

Great sexy writing and story telling.

Hoping Matty's sister also becomes more involved as I guess she is secretly part of the whole plan.

AnonymousAnonymous10 months ago

I'm glad that shes not a cruel mistress. I love the way she asks for his consent and she doesnt verbally humiliate him. She almost a maternal figure. Very hot. Thanks for writing this.

MatureandkinkyMatureandkinky5 months ago

Love the story development.

Love the dialogue and mind games.

Lucky Matthew !!!

Another 5 Star chapter 👏

UzumakiNaruto9999UzumakiNaruto9999about 2 months ago

Nice chapter and development. Finally there was more submission and especially teasing which was missing in previous chapter 😊

EssEssCehEssEssCehabout 1 month ago

There are so few femdommes in smut I would like to have as a friend and confidante.

It's refreshing to have a decent human being in the femdomme-role. Usually we get the "miss dolores"-type I'm a cruel mistress as only personality trait femdommes and I find those boring and deeply unerotic.

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