A Promise Kept

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Now, at last, they could really be together; she could be with him, and give herself to him in every way she could think of-- and that was exactly as it should be. Exactly as she had always wanted it to be, on some level.

Theirs was a permanent happiness, Rebecca knew. Henry thought so too-- he'd waited for her so long. So, after some conversation, Rebecca went off her birth control; and the two of them got their family underway. It didn't take long for Rebecca to get pregnant, and each day passed in excited anticipation for the arrival of their little one.

Rebecca was the happiest she had ever been-- and she knew she would be able to keep feeling that way forever.

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

I remember the first time I slept with someone I really wanted, I stripped her too but really took my time each item felt like it was charged with electricity. I was disappointed that he didnt feel that way and we have no idea of what they looked like, good effort though.

Kurata_MenorKurata_Menoralmost 3 years ago

Reading this makes the asshole in me wonder how the story would have panned out if Rebecca refused to honour the deal she made with Henry.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

This is a wonderful piece of art.

SlowbutAvidReaderSlowbutAvidReaderalmost 3 years ago

An enjoyable read. I haven't written anything that I like thus far, so my opinion can only be that of a reader. The feeling I get as I finished reading this, was that the characters could be more fully developed. We lived the entire time in her mind, and as we all know, in our mind our appearance is unimportant, so the reader became the subject. I guess it helped me to get in touch with my feminine side, but otherwise I didn't have an opportunity to really feel like I knew either character.

Having said that, please don't take any of it as criticism. I did really enjoy reading the story, and the discovery of the main character to her position in life. Few of us ever really get to discover that. Keep up the effort, you have a talent.

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