All Comments on 'A Quick Trip Away with Wife Pt. 01'

But I couldn't find it either.

I can't wait to see where this leads!

(And BTW that jerk 26thnc is a total loser. Pay no attention to his ramblings.)

OK we have a loving couple on vacation, that is good. Guy has a nine in cock and she loves to give head, that is also good. I hope he doesn't bring in another guy for the wife, that would be bad.

This has the making of a good exhibitionist story or even a romance. If you go the LW way then it has to become cuckhold as why else would she cheat? Sounds like she has it made.

Before a beach boy joins the story and you have to explain why you are still married 7 years later.

No plot. Seems to be heading toward cuck husband watching wife with others. That will find a better audience in Fetish category. 2 star

Married couple goes to Hawaii. She brought a bathing suit. They have sex. THE END.

That was gripping. Thanks!

Another newbie who cranks out a half dozen stories in a month, all of which suck, and then this drivel. Sadly this is quickly going to morph into nothing more than another in the long list of sick cuck stories.

I tried to get into the story but couldn't find one. Stop while you're ahead.

This was a pretty lame and wannabe attempt. First, you did not mention whether the one piece was a swimsuit or a beach dress, so I assumed it was a dress beacuse of the deep cut at sides, but then, u revealed it was a suit because she put on a sundress later on.

Second, u mention the "bar just off the beach" and the next line starts with "it was packed". By that we assume the 'bar' was packed but apparently it was the beach u were referring to. Work on these things if u want to keep the story riveting and realistic.

Thrid this was too goddamn short to be called a story or even a thing on this website.

A married couple goes on vacation. And?

Love the communication, love the banter...

Little character hints about the wife's history and her own kinks added some nice depth – and maybe a bit of foreshadowing.

Don't make us wait for part 2!

??? There was a story???

Where is the plot? There's no story here. 1*

Ok, but skimpy bikinis are better for minimal tropical tan lines,,,, i like a good monokini too, but the tan lines ... nyet

Interesting mention by Mattenw that the Bertellsmann Foundation have shown that wife sharing/swapping/cuckolding lead to breakup within two years.

I tried Googling but couldn't find anything, so please Mattenw can you provide a more specific link; I'm sure quite a few people would be interested in reading it.