All Comments on 'A Quiet Backyard'

Well written, but then anyone who references Balzac...

I didn't care for the brother's interlude - but that's my personal taste and did not reduce your star quotient. Keep it up.

Very cute and enjoyable. I particularly like the flow from family member to family member.

great story.... just wish i could have seen all the characters sucking and stroking dad

Thank you for your kind words.

As a Proof Reader, you would need to find employment. . . Please, Proof Read this story, the numerous errors virtually jump off the page.

Unfortunately the errors diminished what would have been a great score.

Point them out. I am willing to take notes.

I am enjoying this series very much, I hope you continue it!

Thank you!

Absolutely loved the droll humor attributed to dad. 'Twas a great story up to the point of Freddy and Luke. Obviously I'm not a fan of MM sex. Also, as a proofreader you should know that the past tense of grind is ground and not grinded . . . .

Everyone has the right to their own taste. Thank you for the note on grammar. English is not my first language (and I have never worked as a proof-reader).