All Comments on 'A Random Act and Its Chance Reward'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Started a good story but

Far to short needed more build up (like him getting glances of her ass and puss)

The (9" cock puts reader off (big dicks and tits don't make good reading).

It should of ended with him cumming deep up inside her unprotected pussy.

Then gone on to chapter 2

Jessie92Jessie92over 3 years ago
Wonderful short story!

Seriously love this story!

AnetteSnowAnetteSnowover 3 years ago
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There's nothing sexier than a man shovelling snow. Fact.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago

Very sexy but wish it had been longer haha

Jessie92Jessie92over 2 years ago

You're welcome ;)

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I love the thrill and suspense of rock climbing. It takes me to heights and cliff edges I would otherwise not see or experience. In the same way, I like to write and read stories that take us on a journey together. For me, suspense and anticipation often heightens arousal. ...