All Comments on 'A Randy Retirement Pt. 22: Ellie & Mina Ch. 02'

Thank you, for this wonderful Conclusion of Minas Storyline, and for more of Ellies in the Future.

This excellent story is not a stand-alone; it makes no sense unless read from the beginning, not just of Chapter 22 Part 1, but the story as a whole from Chapter 1. That said, this is a great story, and the ability of the author to give the different characters such distinctive personalities and characteristics, is most notable. This wonderful drama has a marvelous romantic atmosphere studded with beautifully written if rather too-shot love scenes. It is hard for the reader to wait for the next chapter in this story, but can be content knowing that the wait will be worth it. Five stars for great story telling!

I cannot wait to read what’s next! This is such an amazing story! Your vision is so beautifully written!!!!!! Hoping for a new update soon :)

Literotica posted this story out of order for some reason. It was such a confusing start reading part 02 first

Such an amazing work of art! Beautifully written and amazing detail. Can’t wait to find out what happens next!!