All Comments on 'A Randy Retirement Pt. 25: Katie'

The plot moves swiftly in this excellent new chapter of this exceptional series. Outstanding story telling in every respect, and the author excels in his ability to give each new character special characteristics that really command the attention of the reader. Five stars.

Editorial quibble: a refrigerator is usually shortened to "fridge" with an added "d", not "frig". "Frig" is a different word. Was used several times and the editing/spelling is generally otherwise excellent so it kinda stands out. And for some reason I wanted more physical description of Katie beyond small nipples and hair and tan...