A Reality Bender's Story Ch. 01

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Mateo was ready to run finally, but then that last bit. What the actual fuck? He had never seen his father, heard more than few words about him, had no idea about any family. Was this guy for real? In 17 years this would be the most compelling thing related to the man that Mateo had experienced.

"We, your father and I, are Djinn. Reality manipulators, ancient and powerful." Jax said, hands still up to placate, "You are a what is commonly known as an elf - a Djinn adjacent. Less than, and yet powerful and dangerous."

Mateo opened his mouth to speak, to question this man, this 'grandfather', ask about how he had implanted thoughts, or how he could read them for this matter. Yet suddenly his mind melted. Hit by a billion trillion volts of electricity, turn his mind and insides into goo.

Or so it felt like.

The last thing he saw before darkness swept over him, was his grandfather, whose black as night hair seemed to perfect, unmoving in the gentle breeze.

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AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Very interesting

I see you're unrolling a whole fictional "universe" here. It will be interesting to see how this develops. I like the fact that others around Mateo are also participants in creating the reality and hope that will continue. For some folks it's what they want, but for me turning everyone around them into mindless, thoughtless drones is boring.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Not my surprise.

Probably should mention the story is bisexual before the end.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
You hooked me

I didn’t expect this at all. Considering the title, I was expecting some ancient type tale but this is so much more. I cannot wait to read more.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Loved it !

Original and well written. Looking forward to more.

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