All Comments on 'A Reunion'

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H.H.MorantH.H.Morantabout 11 years ago
So?

Routine lower level revenge story (no rape, kidnapping. that sort of thing) but no resolution. It looks like Zack has thrown out the lure and Valarie snapped it - but to what end. So he could do it? Big deal on a pointless plot

gabaagabaaabout 11 years ago
Why?

Seems a bit strange that a really successful guy would even bother to pay off an old score like this. Success is the best revenge.

By the way 'disinterested' has a completely different meaning from 'uninterested' which is the word you intended to use.

Prolonged_Debut10Prolonged_Debut10about 11 years ago
Unless-

If you plan to continue this story, Okay. If not It is a Zero.

strangenicklestrangenickleabout 11 years agoAuthor
I do plan to continue.

I hope this isn't the end.

spankmegirl23spankmegirl23about 11 years ago
Ok

It was good but no revenge was really made he should have spanked her out of revenge and maked her tell him all of it then maked her suck him then go like he did just took his madness out on her ass then his cock in her mouth would been hot !!

RePhilRePhilabout 11 years ago
Where is the story??

No conclusion for this poor WACC Wimp Ass Castrated Cuckold or the story

PordusPordusabout 11 years ago
Impressed

Impressed by the story and development, feels like that ending was the most likely one when looking back to the chain of events. I like that down-to-ground feeling the story left me with and the open ending was one of the better I have experienced seeing that there are some likely outcomes and not cementating any of them was a good move, thank you.

PordusPordusabout 11 years ago
And

That revenge was probably the best possible* good work

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Good start

I like the way this has begun, him initially declining her advances and then using her. I think he should continue to build on his revenge, maybe have someone see her after he gives her a facial.

Jhbrown27Jhbrown27over 4 years ago
Another half story

Failure. Well to do guy with everything gets cheap revenge on a failed actress he had an affair with. Wow, some big man he is. Find the most down person you can and kick them. I hope she can find some thug to cut the guys cock off.

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