by strangenickle
Routine lower level revenge story (no rape, kidnapping. that sort of thing) but no resolution. It looks like Zack has thrown out the lure and Valarie snapped it - but to what end. So he could do it? Big deal on a pointless plot
Seems a bit strange that a really successful guy would even bother to pay off an old score like this. Success is the best revenge.
By the way 'disinterested' has a completely different meaning from 'uninterested' which is the word you intended to use.
If you plan to continue this story, Okay. If not It is a Zero.
It was good but no revenge was really made he should have spanked her out of revenge and maked her tell him all of it then maked her suck him then go like he did just took his madness out on her ass then his cock in her mouth would been hot !!
No conclusion for this poor WACC Wimp Ass Castrated Cuckold or the story
Impressed by the story and development, feels like that ending was the most likely one when looking back to the chain of events. I like that down-to-ground feeling the story left me with and the open ending was one of the better I have experienced seeing that there are some likely outcomes and not cementating any of them was a good move, thank you.
I like the way this has begun, him initially declining her advances and then using her. I think he should continue to build on his revenge, maybe have someone see her after he gives her a facial.
Failure. Well to do guy with everything gets cheap revenge on a failed actress he had an affair with. Wow, some big man he is. Find the most down person you can and kick them. I hope she can find some thug to cut the guys cock off.