by ao1701e
This is one of the best series / readings I've ever read. Please keep up great work!
Four to five pages is a good length for chapters. I liked this one much better, too… no parents turning what’s already a fantasy into an even more unbelievable story of parents abusing their kids’ trust.
Great story, not too far-fetched, magically speaking. Well handled sex scenes. The use of capital letters needs some adjusting. Would like to have read more of the girls wearing the ring so Ezzie could get fucked again.