All Comments on 'A Ring Named Ezzie Pt. 10'

Amazing story. Please keep going

Great story, really enjoying this

Did not like the BDSM in the last chapter at all. The love story in the beginning of this story was lost. Read the first page of this installment and had to skip the rest and leave this comment. The loving partners have disappeared.

I keep wanting to like this series and you have basically destroyed it. You can't seem to help but make Ben submissive and the Karen humiliating him thing you seem to dig as well. Like if you want to tell a story about a female Dom, then tell that story. At this point based on what you've written Ben would like being tied up fucked in the ass by Beth while Karen gets gangbanged by who the fuck ever. Which her to each their own, but then what the hell is the point of him having mind control powers? The whole point of the genre is for him to have power fantasies not for him to be powerless.