All Comments on 'A Rite of Passage'

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Aimie2469Aimie2469almost 7 years ago
Said the Spider to the Fly!

OMG: Whats NEXT?

blondsublesblondsublesalmost 7 years agoAuthor
Lol

Thanks for getting the reference :D

soppingwetpantiessoppingwetpantiesalmost 7 years ago
Loved it

Well written. Can't wait to see what Raven looks like. And little one's submission.

rightbankrightbankalmost 7 years ago
So many hints

Raven,

Viper,

Maizy,

the way she drawn into the shadow,

the lure of the perfume,

the light,

Don't worry little one I'll take you home,

it's time for a snack

RenataAsheRenataAshealmost 7 years ago
Mouth open

Please continue, I'm on the edge of my seat.

JoyJoy4MeJoyJoy4Mealmost 7 years ago

Loved it. Talented writer you are blondsubles. Will there be more?

FranziskaSissyFranziskaSissyalmost 3 years ago

Just short and to the point ..... And yeah with 21 a truly something happen event ...... Hopefully it ends well , being taken care beyond imagination ....... Lovely

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