All Comments on 'A Sexual's Reproduction Ch. 08'

I decided to round up and give this a 5/5. The story was great, and while the grammar wasn't perfect, it was way above average.

However, I was frustrated by the extreme descriptions that made everyone seem like a huge ball of fat with holes, not unlike an extremely disfigured and cheap blow-up doll.

And I can't help but cringe every time you write about cervical penetration. I'm sure at some point you've heard a doctor say, "On a scale of zero to 10, describe how much pain you're in, with zero being no pain, and 10 being the worst pain you can imagine." Well, it would be a 999 out of 10.

Ultimately, I decided to set my personal preferences aside and rate this as if I were someone into... all that. Good work!

loved it!!!!!!! is there more to cum?