All Comments on 'A Sexy Summer Short'

Great story! You like the "sound" of your voice. TOO much!!!

Great story telling and very hot. Most guys remember that young woman that they spend-the summer with as a great and thrilling sex experience. I often wondering how she go along at college. She was up for almost anything. Thanks for bringing back some great memories. As for your writing skills, stick to this formula as to not bogging the story flow with too much character revisionist history. Great job.

enjoyable sexy story

Can I suggest you go through the story and replace the noun with a pronoun (she for Heather) wherever possible. Names can be very jarring when repeated over and over, especially when there are only 2 people involved.

Tom said to Susan, "Hello Susan" and Susan said to Tom, "Well hello Tom,"

You get the idea.

Nice story. I think everyone has one of those summer flings, were you both know it will never go any further but it was very enjoyable at the time. Mine was with a cousin, and although we were hot and heavy for two weeks, that was 50 some years ago and I have never seen her again. But like this story, a great memory.

Ah, to be young again. Sun tanned bodies and waves of sunshine, California girls and beautiful coastline, warmed up weather let's get together and do it again. Loved it, more please?

Young sex nicely related.

Some of us weren't lucky enough to find a girlfriend to bang all summer way back then, but I wouldn't have turned down the opportunity if I'd had it. Even if you made half of it up, I'd still be envious of your summer with Heather. Good luck in the contest.

Well told story that brought back vivid memories of my summer PYT, especially your descriptions of her body and tan lined ass.Fortunately I was able to extend my fling for several months after she left for college. It was as wild time filled with experimentation and discovery.

Great story - very well written and very erotic.