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Realization hits her, her brother just came inside her. That was it. That was the final piece missing. His cum inside her. Now she is complete.
She realizes it probably isn't much, no more than a drop or two was all he was able to muster, but that is all she needs. She smiles. She snuggles deeper into him and kisses him tenderly. She has what she has always wanted. She has her brother, he is hers. His cock inside her, his cum inside her, her brother deeply inside her. They both slip off into sleep, absolutely content and feeling complete for the first time in their lives.
- COMMENTS
MagicTrishabout 2 months agoEnjoyed the build, the will we, wont we questions. An online romance, where one feels more than the other, is more common than we realize. Online, should be all fantasy, but to be good, emotions have to be involved also. This is one way change and unfulfilling sex life.
shadracht5 months agoYou did a great job of building a background with hints and references without giving us an info dump like many stories seem to. The buildup of attraction and lust was very well done, and the resulting sex scenes were hot. I concur that the reference of a g spot for him was jarring, but everything else was great. 5*
Anonymous7 months agoGood premise.
But rushed.
Needed more preliminaries/foreplay before the blowjob.
Lots of slow, sensuous playing with his cock and balls.
Certainly needs him playing with her tits. Maybe some titty fucking before cock enter her mouth.
While he's staring at her ass, maybe some fingering her asshole.
Four stars.
Robinius19 months agoWonderful. A little confused about the brother having a 'spot.' First time I've heard of this. I can only assume it to be his frenulum. I very much enjoyed your story. Thank you.
Anonymous9 months agoFive stars, wish it could be more, your work deserves it! Looking at your 'Bio' you don't say whether you're male or female, but I sense a softer, more fulfilling side of intimacy that might be lacking were it from a male writer. Either way, you're very talented, please don't stop writing.
Anonymous9 months agoDon't know why you tagged this story of two siblings cheating on their spouses only with "oral".
There's something that doesn't work with this story (for me), regrettably hard to pinpoint, I think it's something about authenticity. I get this image of a man trying to write cleverly and convey a woman's feelings, that he actually knows too little about.
Anonymous9 months agoWas really hoping for a good brother/sister story but having her married when they get together ruined it. Never a fan of cheating, swinging, sharing or swapping, no matter who they are. 2*
Anonymous9 months agoGood premise.
Sex too automatic.
Needs extended/extensive details.
Dialog is really stilted.
Three stars.
