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Click hereRealization hits her, her brother just came inside her. That was it. That was the final piece missing. His cum inside her. Now she is complete.
She realizes it probably isn't much, no more than a drop or two was all he was able to muster, but that is all she needs. She smiles. She snuggles deeper into him and kisses him tenderly. She has what she has always wanted. She has her brother, he is hers. His cock inside her, his cum inside her, her brother deeply inside her. They both slip off into sleep, absolutely content and feeling complete for the first time in their lives.
Enjoyed the build, the will we, wont we questions. An online romance, where one feels more than the other, is more common than we realize. Online, should be all fantasy, but to be good, emotions have to be involved also. This is one way change and unfulfilling sex life.
You did a great job of building a background with hints and references without giving us an info dump like many stories seem to. The buildup of attraction and lust was very well done, and the resulting sex scenes were hot. I concur that the reference of a g spot for him was jarring, but everything else was great. 5*
Good premise.
But rushed.
Needed more preliminaries/foreplay before the blowjob.
Lots of slow, sensuous playing with his cock and balls.
Certainly needs him playing with her tits. Maybe some titty fucking before cock enter her mouth.
While he's staring at her ass, maybe some fingering her asshole.
Four stars.