All Comments on 'A Show for the Masses'

Two "thumbs down."

Started off so strong and then just stopped.

I thought this was great!

The idea here is super hot, I loved it. Being held captive while constantly fucked by a monster in front of a crowd is an exhibitionist's dream. If I could offer a couple suggestions, I would try to keep the tenses the same (instead of jumping between past and present) for clarity. I also had a hard time understanding what positions the narrator was in, especially with the restraints at the beginning. I'd love to read more like this, and I hope you'll continue writing!

Holy crap, this hit my fantasies in *all* the right spots. I'd love more of this